Heat Index at Midnight

THE ADULT TENSION WORKS IN PIECES, BUT THE CHAOS THAT ALMOST WORKS NEEDED CLEANER EMOTIONAL BUILD UP. still thinking about it.

the first chapter does its job. warm, messy, and then boom, locked door.

not too much, not too clean. just enough heat to make stopping there annoying in the best way.

chapter 1 ending was rude. i knew exactly why i needed the next one lol.

the adult tension works in pieces, but the chaos that almost works needed cleaner emotional build up. like... hello??? i would unlock this again.

wait wait wait. THE DRAMA ATE THE PLOT A LITTLE. THE DO-NOT-DISTURB SIGN WAS COOL BUT I NEEDED MORE REASONS TO CARE.

THE DRAMA ATE THE PLOT A LITTLE. THE COLD SOUP TRAY WAS COOL BUT I NEEDED MORE REASONS TO CARE. I am SAT. that ending was rude in the best way.

the drama ate the plot a little. the black room card was cool but i needed more reasons to care. chapter 2 broke me.

the idea is good but the pacing jumps. i wanted more tenderness between the chaos. the mood is stuck in my head.

the idea is good but the pacing jumps. i wanted more tenderness between the chaos. ⚡ still thinking about it.